Amaterasu Paintingby *XxXFurryNeddyXxX

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Amateur tickling for a dog.

So here's Amaterasu tickled by paintbrushes

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Submitted on: September 25, 2011
Image Size: 287 KB
Resolution: 1292×562

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Critique by ~LeenaandFriends Nov 21, 2012, 3:15:20 PM

(Boy, I'd hate to be Ammy right now.

) Let's start with all the good things you've got well. ^^ You seem to have done nicely with proportions of Amaterasu's body-you even remembered to add the marking on her head and those features she has on her shoulders and hind legs. You did a nice job of showing that she is indeed covered with fur by adding designs that show a bit of a furry texture (like he small triangle shapes on the side of her head and the triangular points you placed on her tail). Marvelous job was down on her expression, I could really tell that this was really driving her crazy.

Nice creativity was displayed with having paintbrushes "attacking" her, adds some nice irony as she usually uses paintbrush techniques to HELP herself, rather then put her in a difficult spot like this (nice job adding some faint color on the spots where the brushes are stroking her paws, adds a more realistic affect). Ok, now for some things that, in MY personal opinion, mind you, I think you could improve a little on: first off, the front top of Ammy's head doesn't seem to align with the back of her head behind her ear. The shading looks a LITTLE weird to me since you added a darker line of Ammy's white color to add lighting and then proceeded to use a transparent black coloring to overlay her in some areas. I believe that Ammy's hind legs don't appear to be aligned to each other like her front ones. Overall, I'd say this's a marvelous tickle-torture picture of everyone's favorite Wolf-Goddess of the Sun.

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